Perhaps a revised version might acknowledge some other definitions of the term? --Jimbo Wales
Not at all. Indeed, in terms of a definition by essentials, this is probably much better than a definition based on 'intervention'.
Incidentally, 'the absense of government intervention' and 'private economic decision-making' are identitical concepts. By definition, decision-making is private when it is not governmental, whereas if the government intervenes, it can only be to alter the private decision-making that would have occured otherwise. Drawing a distinction between the two is not useful. -TS
I think that logically, laissez-faire capitalism is pure capitalism, and anything else is diluted capitalism. If we want to define our concepts in terms of essentials, then capitalism is a system based on non-intervention. - TS
Checking the quickest to grab sources. Britannica starts out by equating capitalism with a free market but in the same breath says it has been dominant since the decline of feudalism. Encarta mentions minimal gov intervention as one of the primary characteristics, but is talking mainly about modern capitalism, and elsewhere calls mercantilism a different kind. M-W does the same. And a book randomly grabbed off the shelf, A history of Early Modern Europe, places the development of Commercial Capitalism from 1500-1650. All of these care more about private ownership and, in the case of the last, the appearance of a merchant class, and clearly indicate that the system was in place well before Smith. So I think that your definition is non-standard at best.
What we now call capitalism was first systematically proposed by Adam Smith for the specific purpose of refuting mercantlism. So if the standard definition says mercantilism is a kind of capitalism, then the standard definition is wrong. Economic activity can be either economically motivated (broadly defined), or politically motivated: either people act as they choose, or they act as they are compelled to act. The distinction is relevant and should be addressed in the definition of the terms we use to refer to these concepts. The concept 'economic activity that is free of government intervention' is referred to using the word 'capitalism' because there is no other word in common usage for that concept. If you stick other concepts under the umbrella of that word then you destroy the distinction between economically motivated and politically motivated action, which would be bad, because the distinction is relevant. One's understanding of the issues is significantly impaired without it. - TS
Agreed, the distinction between Mercantilism and the system proposed by Adam Smith is important. Therefore we should be careful to use the right words for each. The latter is called laissez faire capitalism because, as is plainly evident from the examples, capitalism does not refer specifically to it. Encarta mentions that the first use of the word capitalism was by Marx, who plainly intended it to cover all economic systems after feudalism, and as shown above that definition is still used in most sources today. So you are claiming that the original and prevalent sense of the word is somehow wrong, and I think you can see how that's ridiculous.
Incidentally, when Lenin attempted to equate capitalism with imperialism (in 'Imperialism, the Highest Stage of Capitalism'), he was deliberately attempting to impair your understanding by destroying the aforementioned distinction. Communism involves political control of the economy, likewise imperialism; capitalism does not. So which go together? Clearly communism and imperialism. But Lenin wanted to advance communism as being opposed to imperialism, so the commonality between them had to be played down. To do this he advanced a category scheme in which the distinction between the economic and the political was obliterated. It is high time to undue Lenin's work, and restore a sensible category scheme that classifies by essentials. - TS
I'm not particularly interested in getting in a political debate, but the above is just flawed reasoning. Imperialism refers to a practice by which powerful nations exert control over weaker ones. Obviously a government's control over its people is not an example of imperialism, whereas the mercantilist policies that were the most prominent form of capitalism at the time of Marx' writing are. Moreover note that imperialism involves control by nations or peoples, not necessarily the governments thereof - see the afformentioned sources as examples of the way the word is actually used - so the term also applies to control of other nations via privately owned corporations, which is still a prominent feature of capitalism today.
But mercantilism is very clearly a form of government control of "its" people. If it is a form of imperialism, as the above seems to claim, then the mercantlist form of government control of "its" people is imperialism. In capitalist theory, mercantilism is essentially the domestic corollary of imperialism. - TS
What makes mercantilism imperialistic is not the government's control of trade, but the fact that under that system people were sailing off all over the world taking over and exploiting large chunks of land. That's the definition of imperialism. I suggest you learn it before you make statements about what is or is not imperialistic.
I should also mention that your last sentence, it is high time to undo Lenin's work, is highly unsettling. Terms like capitalism and imperialism have well-known meanings, and what you seem to be proposing is for us to change these away from the standard in order to reflect some particular opinion on what the essentials of different systems are. Redefinition of words for the advancement of an agenda is propaganda, and I would strongly encourage you to abandon such a program right now, because it is both in violent contrast with the goals of an encyclopedia and is quite frankly offensive.
You seem to be redefining Propaganda to suit your agenda. Propaganda refers to information, not definition. Also, the redefinition of words to serve an agenda is precisely what I accuse Lenin of doing, and what I would like to have undone. This unsettles you, but then you accuse me of doing the same thing and say you would like to undue my definitions. Is it ok to redefine words, but only if it advances a socialist agenda? And what is my agenda, exactly? -TS
Redefining words is used primarily to add respectability to new ideas and to transfer their implications, and is actually a very common form of propaganda. Thus the well-known word Aryan was misapplied by Hitler to make it seem as if his master race was an established concept, and thus the term democracy was occasionally applied by communists to their own systems to make them seem good.
Definitions evolve as our understanding of underlying concepts evolve. The concept of charge, as used by Franklin, who coined the term in physics, is very different from the concept as used by physicists today. Should they abandon the term because they do not mean the same thing Franklin meant? Economics has been extended to the study of human action in general. Some people object to this on methodological grounds, but should we say it is wrong because that's not what someone 160 years ago meant by economics. Our understanding of capitalism today is vastly superior to Say's or Marx's. Why shouldn't our definition of the term change to reflect this improved understanding? -TS
Our physics is superior to Franklin's, but charge still means the same thing it always did; our gravity is something different from Newton's, but it is still recognisably akin. The change we are talking about here is of a different nature altogether, where both the fundamental idea behind and the circumscription of the concept are being changed completely - it is like redefining insect to mean ant because we now have a better understanding of what ants are like. In any case, though, my point is not about the original use - see below.
Now you have announced that you intend to impose a new categorization of political systems, that is your agenda. I personally suspect this is mainly with the intent of making certain systems seem more respectable and others seem worse, as in your needless redefinition of imperialism - something generally regarded as negative - from something that applies to capitalist systems to something that applies to communist ones, reminiscent of the above. But that is neither here nor there: as an encyclopedia reports on things as they are and not as they should be, you should leave words with their original meanings. Capitalism was never redefined by socialists, it was defined by them in the first place, and so expresses their particular view of the world, and should. If you want to express a different concept, then for heaven's sakes use different words!!!
Agreed, and this is my point. Capitalism should be defined the way it is everywhere else; laissez faire should be treated as a subtype. If there is no reasonable disagreement I plan to make this change sometime later this week.
The main complaint here is not merely the tone, but that the article is using an inaccurate and propagandical definition, while brushing off as 'socialist' what is both the original meaning of the term and the variety found in all sources checked - and I would not consider Encarta a hotbed of socialist rhetoric. In short, this is the meaning of the term, and if you think that it is fair to pass that off as a variant then you are writing partisan nonsense more appropriate for a party newsletter.
So for consistency's sake, Josh must argue we should only use the word 'liberal' to refer to a whig. -TS
If that were what people mean when they say liberal, I would argue such; but they do not. Original meanings only came into things when you had the audacity to claim you had a right to adjust definitions because they were socialist propaganda (and strangely denying at the same time that definitions can be propagandical)...
I did not call Lenin's wordplay 'propaganda'. I wrote most of the Propaganda article so you can go see this is not what I mean by the term. I deny the charge that I contradicted myself. - TS - Fair enough, I'll grant you that.
...My main point, which is unaddressed,...
My justifications for this use of the word 'capitalism' are above, if you care to wade through this mess. Also, as I added to the main page, it is a definition that is used by people who call themselves capitalists, which gives it a certain legitimacy. -TS
The justifications given above are as far as I can tell entirely based upon the term capitalism as usually defined grouping together various systems which have little in common except private ownership and being coined by socialists. Neither of those is a good reason for altering the definition of a word. That capitalists themselves define the word such would be a much better argument - but are there not people who call themselves state capitalists, and do they not also determine what practitioners use the word to mean?
... is that this also the prevalent current usage of the term, as evidenced by citations to a number of current sources. Words are welcome to evolve, but noone decides when and how they should, and they are rarely forced to without propaganda as a motivating force; perhaps someday your definition will prevail, and then should be used here, but not until then.
This as a policy could be problematic. Take the definition we use for evolution, "the change in the genetic characteristics of a population over time." This is a more technical definition than the one educated laypersons might use, such as, "change in a species to keep it adapted to its environment." Should we abandon the precise definition because it is not how most non-experts think of it? I don't think that would be desirable. I don't know exactly what the guidelines for other cases would be. -TS
Yes, I agree that there are times when the general public understanding of a term (even among educated persons) may be considered a misconception by experts. I think in that case it's important to point this out immediately, e.g.:
"Many people use the term 'evolution' to mean the same thing biologists call 'adaptation', but it is more properly used to refer only to changes that occur over time, regardless of the reasons for those changes...."
Also note that the broader definition of capitalism is not just used by laypeople but also by economic and political historians, who presumably are those most interested in the variations of said field. In short, by everyone except possibly certain capitalists themselves.
Josh, I'm a little bit unclear about what you find problematic about the definition. You seem to regard it as somehow ideological or politically motivated, but I don't see how it is. I'm not asking out of idle curiosity -- I want to attempt a rewrite that addresses your concerns, but without losing the essence of what Tim is after, either, i.e. a conceptually sound definition.
One improvement that I can see immediately is the recognition that 'capitalism' is a broader term than 'laissez-faire capitalism', with the latter being the purest form of the former, with the purity determined in precisely the way that Tim's definiton would lead us to suspect: i.e. 'capitalism' is a term applied to systems with relatively little political intervention into the economy, and 'laissez-faire capitalism' has very little political intervention into the economy. Therefore, the U.S. is a predominantly capitalist system, but not purely so.
The main complaint with the definition given is that it has very little resemblance to the definition of capitalism. At least according to all the sources listed above, capitalism has been a dominant system since 15-1600 and includes mercantilism and state capitalism under its aegis - so clearly low gov intervention is not being considered a primary, let alone the primary, characteristic of the system. Even with the acknowledgement that "other definitions" are used, it makes no sense to me why such a relatively uncommon definition would be given precedence, and no real reasons have been given.
I disagree very strongly. The definition is not at all unusual, and it is the one that most economists use, implicitly or explicitly.
All of the sources listed state capitalism has been around since the fall of feudalism. It's not like they were selectively picked or anything - they're two very well known encyclopedias plus a book I picked up randomly since I didn't have a history of modern europe handy. I would assume that laissez faire is simply understood in economic literature, just like numbers are assumed to be integers when counting - not implying that other things aren't examples, just that laissez faire capitalism is cumbersome to say.
What has been said is that the new definition ought to be given to help "undo Lenin's work", and it seems to me that implies an ideological program. Redefinition of words to fulfil such is, if not propaganda in whatever sense we are using, at the very least spin doctoring and I sincerely hope nobody has any such intents.
One might suppose that Lenin's definitions are explicitly and paradigmatically ideological in a bad way, and that avoiding them for that reason, in favor of a more conceptually clear system that is in current use by professionals would be a more in the right direction, no? --Jimbo
An ideological classification might be replaced, sure, but an ideological definition should not. If one doesn't like what the word means one should simply avoid using it altogether. Trying to force a different meaning on top of the word is silly and confusing. Example: Buddhism and Shamanism are both pagan religions, even though they have little in common; should the word pagan be redefined?
However I honestly can't come up with any other way to read said sentiments (especially not with the strong misuse of imperialism above) and barring that do not understand why we would not use the word the same way other sources do.
The reasons for using this definition were given above. They have nothing to do with Lenin. -TS
You claimed that the current system of political distinctions was advanced by him and ought to be abolished because it implies false relationships. Looking back you applied that to imperialism rather than capitalism, but it's still suggests you have a strong agenda. I can find no reasons above other than "that's what capitalism" and "that's what capitalists mean by the term", but as stated other sources use the term differently, and presumably state capitalists do not mean the term in such a manner. If you have any others I would very much appreciate a bullet point recap, like:
Those systems are regarded as capitalistic precisely because they involve lesser degrees of political intervention in the economy than previously. I can explain this further if you like. There is absolutely no conflict between saying that capitalism is about freedom from political intervention, *and* in saying that it has been dominant since the fall of feudalism.
Yeah, yeah, I see your point. However, I do think it is necessary to put the word 'right' back in there somehow. And the separation of political and economic decision making is important, too. What we want to avoid is an unconceptual listing of inessential characteristics as the _sole_ definition.
Interesting to see the entry evolve, co-operatively. But I think it is a fundamental error to build the definition on a contrast between private decision-making and government intervention.
One of the first achievements of capitalism was to overcome Christian objections to unnatural propagation--that is, unrestricted gain, usury. A second was to destroy the power of merchant guilds, nongovernmental organizations that attempted to control trade.
Relatedly, the notion of private property or private enterprise requires clarification. Workmen owned their tools in the Middle Ages and made private decisions about seeking work, making contracts, and so on.
What makes it capitalism, then? Maybe capitalism involves the creation of class of producing-property owners whose business it is to BE property owners, whose decisions and activities center on this ownership.
And of course they don't hesitate to use governments to advance their interests.
Perhaps all of this is vaguely covered by the remark that a pure capitalist system has never existed. OK, but what would such a system be like--what is the word referring to, if it isn't referring to things that do exist?
A similar problem exists with centering attention on the private decisions that are based on market conditions.
What would a society be like if decisions about production were based purely on the pursuit of private gain under market conditions? One result--the most desirable from the point of view of the individual entrepreneur--would be the destruction of market constraints on his activity. In other words, the end of the market. As Smith noted, the Masters never gather together for a drink without plotting to control wages--or was it prices?
One has in Smith the view that competition puts limits on how far the individual can go towards killing the market. But also an awareness of the constant economic pressure towards doing just that. And under conditions of oligopoly--the conditions of most mature markets--the interaction of the dominant players tends to control prices without conspiracy. Tends, that is, to keep prices from falling.
In Smith, the kind of competition that matters is price competition. It is the market, and the source of the invisible hand. That kind of competition largely drops out of the picture in late capitalist economies such as that of the U.S. But no-one would argue that the U.S. is not a capitalist nation.
Lee Daniel Crocker proposes a sensible test of the definition: what a foreign-born person in his fourth year of English would need to know on first seeing the word capitalism in a newspaper. I have known twenty or thirty foreign-born people over the years and have found that most of them have a pretty good understanding of the word already. For them, it's the political economy that came to dominate Europe after the feudal era and was spread to other regions by colonial invasion and by trade.
Starting there, you can present different notions of how the thing works.
Yeh, I'm glad someone else said this because I didn't want to be rude. I don't understand this article, I wonder how many other people do.
Fare: Sorry that you don't like it now. The article as it was was just spewing confusion around between the various meanings of "Capitalism". The current structure can certainly be improved upon, but at least, it is meant to dispel confusion rather than increase it. As for labels, keeping them a bit symbolic (P. for phenomenon, I. for ideology, S. for system) allows to easily add or remove a definition without having to relabel everything. Dictionaries don't dynamically evolve to add or remove definitions; Wikipedia does. I don't pretend that my list of definition is definitive, and actually, I already added I.5 and S.5 (historical definitions) to my original list, after reading comments in here (look for previous revisions of this page before I wroke it).
I am very tempted to add to this sentence:
Critics of capitalism claim that decision-making is made by relatively few rich individuals with little or no democratic accountability, implicitly rejecting the argument for the importance of the coordination of widely distributed knowledge; they don't reject this explicity because then they would need to invoke arguments, and they don't have any.
Anyway, I think this is a pretty good revision. I'm concerned there was some information in the old version that did not make it to the new one; however, reading the new one I had no sense that anything was being left out, so that's a good sign, I guess. - Tim
Fare: thanks for your appreciation. I merged your remark in a further revision, giving it a more neutral tone (classical liberals say that) to make it acceptable.
Josh Grosse: Sorry, that doesn't make it neutral or acceptable, any more than a sentence saying that capitalists are motivated entirely by hatred of humanity and satan-worship would be made acceptable by attributing it to political liberals. I am removing it, the intent is clearly as an insult to critics of capitalism. Out of curiosity, is anyone here motivated by writing a fair article rather than by showing how great/awful capitalism is? I know I'm not, but that's why I've mostly stayed away from the political articles.
Fare: yes, it makes it neutral and acceptable to say "A said B", if "A" did actually say "B", even though "B" may be something completely inaccurate, laden, false, evil, etc. If it is not clear whether A said B, it might be more neutral to say that "C said that A said B". So to take your example, it could be ok to say that some critics of capitalism pretend it is motivated by hatred of humanity, etc. As for fairness, anarcho-capitalists believe it is something to be best achieved by the balance of "egoist" individual forces, than by their "altruist" self-limitation.
Fare: Here's a story on "fairness": a gang of thugs wanted to rape a woman during two days. The woman refused, and asked the wise man of the village to render justice. The wise man said that between conflicting views, it was fair to take the middle path, so that the gang could rape the woman, but only for one day. My conclusion: fairness is not in middle paths. What's a fair account of nazism? of the holy inquisition? of aztec mass human sacrifices? Is it one that doesn't judge them right or wrong? or one that takes into account what people really did, said, and thought about them?
Fare, you are simply wrong here. An article can be entirely factual and still have an unbelievably bias, simply by appropriate organization and selection of material to include. For instance, if I wrote an article about fascism and said nothing but that so-and-so approved and that the trains ran on time, I would have written something entirely correct but very clearly pro-fascist. Likewise, attribution is part of an NPOV but is not the whole thing.
This is ridiculous, isn't it? We should report the arguments of both sides, not the insults of both sides, and definitely not the insults of one side. I'll ask again: are you actually interested in writing a balanced article, or are you interested in exposing how much better one side is than the other? If the latter, I kindly suggest that you find a different section of wikipedia to work with, where you won't be tempted to proselytize.
Fare: such a conversation wouldn't be ridiculous if it actually reflected the debate. Only it doesn't. The latter ways of saying things (in revision 33, for instance) were quite neutral. As for balance, I repeat, it is only by confronting point of views, not by refraining from confronting them, that it will appear: someone tries something, and is corrected by someone else, until things settle down. One may try to replace explicit confrontation by trying to forecast its outcome, but only so much. Refraining altogether from expressing opinions doesn't lead to balanced articles, but to content-free articles.
There is more use for information than trying to persuade people to accept particular positions. I think the vast majority of wikipedia stands as a monument to how completely wrong you are in saying this.
Agreed entirely. I vote we go back to version 20, which was both much clearer and considerably more neutral. In fact, I'm not just voting, I'm doing. Anyone who likes the revised version better is welcome to restore it, but please first make some attempt to make it understandable, and to remove all the pro-libertarianism. --Josh Grosse
I think this was a good move. I'll look at 20,21, etc., to see if there appears to be anything substantive that the rollback may have affected negatively. --Jimbo Wales
Fare: as for balance and clarity, this old version completely confuses the various meanings of "Capitalism", which is but a huge straw man argument against all proponents of capitalism. It also confuses who's who about economists, and gets things utterly wrong about Adam Smith. Its lack of well-defined subsections also increases the confusion, as well as the wild one-sided criticism. I stand by version 33 (http://www.wikipedia.com/wiki.cgi?action=browse&id=Capitalism&revision=33).
Then (1) edit what you perceive as its facutal errors; (2) If you think it needs reorganizing, reorganize; (3) if there are any statements where the "loose" use of the ambiguous term actually makes the sentence wrong, clarify. If you can do that without making the article much longer, without introducing philosophically rigorous but not critically important distinctions that will just confuse a lay reader, and without significantly changing the tone one way or another, I think we'd like that. But pay attention to the audience: this is an encyclopedia, not a jorunal of philosophy. We don't want 20 pages of definitions, we want a simple, concise, answer to the question "what it capitalism" adequate for a high-schooler or foreigner who encounters the word somewhere. If you want to put the rigor somewhere else, that's fine too. --LDC
I agree with LDC here, and with Fare! I'm as big a proponent of capitalism as you're likely to find, but I think it's far more important to have a fair article that will not confuse the lay reader than to attempt to correct every misconception all at once. So, are there problems with the version-20 line of articles? Sure, but the other version was unreadable, especially for the lay person. --Jimbo Wales
I would support such a move. Perhaps Larry has some grand plan for where such things should go. (Although, I hope that we can keep advocates focussed on fighting about how to fairly present the topic, than on fighting about capitalism itself: that's what Usenet is for. :-) ) --Jimbo Wales
Far?[?]: They are the same thing indeed. It's just a terminology problem in the USA. See relevant pages where it's explained.
I'm copying the discussion, though, which makes several valid, useful points and pasting it into the main article, where the discussion of the meanings of "capitalism" belongs anyway (if anything does). --Larry_Sanger
Here are various meanings that can be conveyed, either in isolation or in confusion, through the use of the word "Capitalism". In a vague attempt of classification, the "type" of such definitions have been distinguished as "P" for phenomena, "I" for ideologies, "S" for systems.
As with many common words, and most particularly ideologically laden words, "Capitalism" has many meanings, and there is a lot confusion when using it as to whether it means any particular meaning, or whether it is just a slogan or insult used without particular meaning intend (or worse, with confusion intended).
"Capitalism" as a phenomenon (meanings P.1 to P.4) is certainly different from "Capitalism" as an ideology (I.1 to I.5) or from "Capitalism" as a system (S.1 to S.5) - not the same kind of notion at all. Yet, sometimes the confusion is made nonetheless.
Opponents to Capitalism often deny that these represent subtantially different things -- but then, in some extreme case, religious conservatives consider the whole debate for and against capitalism as the same occidental and jewish plot to corrupt their True Religion (be it Christianity, Islam, or whatever). Although it is arguable whether or not two meanings of the word "Capitalism" of the same kind (for instance, I.4 and I.5, or S.4 and S.5) are somehow "equivalent" under someone's subjective notion of equivalence, for the sake of not making a straw man argument when accusing someone else to be a proponent of Capitalism, these different concepts must be clearly distinguished.
For instance, often the term Capitalism is used by communists to dismiss classical liberalism (I.3) by accusing it with the defects of mercantilism (I.4), even though classical liberalism was invented as a opposition to mercantilism in the first place, long before communism (I.1) was ever popular.
The word Capitalism was mostly unknown, and didn't have any ideologic or systemic connotation until Karl Marx used it in his famous book das Kapital. The word became famous, mostly used by communists in a derogatory way while ignoring any distinction between meanings of it. Finally, some classical liberal thinkers (notably after Ayn Rand) accepted this insult as a valid name for their ideology. Actually, some of the most radical classical liberal thinkers now call themselves anarcho-capitalists (incidentally, Ayn Rand was opposed to anarcho-capitalism).
I removed it for two reasons. First, the two paragraphs seem to contradict eachother: the first claimst that classic liberalism was invented in opposition to Mercantilism (suggesting that from the start liberal economic theory had anideological aspect from the start), but the second paragraph claims that there was no ideological aspect until Marx.
Second, I do not believe that Marx or Marxists ever ascribed Mercantilist logics to Capitalism; Marx's work, and certainly that of subsequent Marxists, was clear to distinguish between Capitalism and Mercantilism.
By the way, Marx characterized Capitalism as an ideology long before writing Capital.
Otherwise I think this article is much improved. nevertheless, I renew my objection to opposing "collectivism" to "capitalism" since capital has always been held collectively, from the Dutch West Indies Company to Enron. SR
Yes, agreed, "collectivism" versus "capitalism" is an Ayn Rand ism more or less - corporations are clearly collectives. So, too, are nations, ultimately.
What's difficult about this article is that it treats capitalism as a feature of ideology, rather than a mechanism or moral code or value system that can be contained inside other ideologies.
Not that this is entirely wrong, but it becomes difficult to make the point that capitalism can be a contained feature, rewarded in certain contexts (like say energy efficiency, or creativity in the arts, or transport safety) and disregarded or punished in others (like say drug trafficking, extortion) and that in fact all of the ideologies suggested in the article do this to some degree or another...
Current controversies are also entirely avoided in favor of a general "this is political, run away" type statement at the end.
I don't think it's difficult or distracting to add a few short bullet points about current issues with/in capitalism:
- energy and material conservation and how resources and waste are valued, e.g. Natural Capitalism - focusing mostly on monopolies held by professions that prevent conservation and encourage waste
- "intellectual property" instruments and their role in rewarding artistic creativity, versus their role in legitimizing appropriation of a genetic or cultural commons, e.g. sampling, Napster, etc. - "individual capitalism"?
- debt interest and rents, and whether deeds in land held from colonial powers, or debts owed to such powers, are valid - part of colonialism debate.
Instead I asked more basic questions and linked very basic "Yes/No" characterizations of the answers of certain well-known thinkers, most of whom are already in wikipedia except for the currently active ones.
If those are acceptable, I'll take a stab at "current specific debates".
It simply dodges the question to refer the reader to all these various political ideologies with no attempt to unify the questions they ask and answer. At the very least, someone should encounter this Chinese menu of political choices with a couple of questions framed neatly here even if we can't answer them or narrow them down much.
The final section which refers to anti-globalization, Lakoff, Jacobs, is significantly more contentious than the characterization of views... and could be separated into another article on "modern capitalism" or (better) "global capitalism".
However, that debate is worth referencing from here - as it is about the structure and purpose of capitalism.
Also, the paragraph in question mentions inventors who rely mostly on patent law, and "creators" in general who rely also on trademark law to signal unambiguously who they are.
These are three different instrumetns with three different purposes, yes, but they are clearly reflective of a difference between individual, instructional, and social capital - collectively, "human capital".
Rather than avoid that argument here, it should be referenced here. See the article on capital
Another possibility is to focus the article on intellectual capital a bit more on these differences. It already references Stallman and Rand. It could just as easily reference the "Let's Roll" debate re: who owns that phrase, etc..
Then, we would have one article absorbing this controversy ("intellectual capital") without taking a position on whether there is such a thing as "intellectual property law" or whether this is just an ideological term.
That leaves "capitalism" and "capital" the more stable articles with the generally accepted extant distinctions made in the literature, i.e. "individual capitalism" is the thing furthered by copyright, and "instructional capitalism" is the thing furthered by patent.
Beyond that you get into some controversy. Some would say that combinations of these with "social capital" is the thing furthered by trademark. Lev's theory that these have a fourth intangible component, "brand capital" is new as of 1999, not common yet, and probably discredited by sudden devaluations in the dotcom boom adn scuh, which seem to show that there's no actual "capital" there - just a bubble of shared delusions.
If there's an argument to be made about "intellectual capital" please put it over there... that article is neutral and doesn't pretend to take a stance on what instruments or laws should be in force, if any.
As wiki is a GNU-ish project, we can expect probably more STallmanish than Randroid opinions - but keep them over there, please. It's hard to keep the capitalism article stable, let alone objective.
Much of the material in the above should go back in, as well. But if this article doesn't primarily outline the debates, and give you a guide to thinkers as well as ideologies, and say something about the current world situation as seen on TV, it's going to end up useless.
It's not bad - but what's it missing?
This is the second time that that contributor has tried to make the point that there is a coutry out there with the 400 years of experience with capitalism but I suppose my country of birth is too small to count.
The other thing I would like to say is that this whole article suffers badly from the fact that all you theorists are missing the point about capitalism completely: the reason it does work (as opposed to some other systems) is precisely BECAUSE it was not dreamt up by some theorist. That is exactly why the history of its evolution is vital for its understanding.
Also, I added a bit on the quibble on communist/capitalist vs. communist/democratic. Pro-communists generally label free world countries as "capitalist", emphasizing the economic system for reasons I don't entirely understand. Anti-communists generally label free world countries as "democratic" (if they hold periodic elections). Maybe advocates of communism don't like to admit that communists countries use force to keep people from leaving communist countries, while the democratic world is the most popular destination for refugees. Can someone explain this better than me, please?
The first thing to do in this situation is to identify what everyone agrees on; in the case of anarchism, it is that each theory advocates the abolition of governmental authority. With capitalism, I think, the basic tenent is private property in the means of production. This, then, should be the starting point for the article.
Currently the article asserts that "The units of productive capacity are commonly Corporations or Companies." Since the vast majority of businesses are small enterprises -- sole traders and partnerships -- this is not accurate, although companies do play a more significant role.
--Andrew It says (or said) "are commonly Corporations or Companies" not "are always or normally Corporations or Companies", so it is (or was) accurate. When measured by value of product, companies as a whole are dominant in their productive capacity in the currently existing Capitalist economies, so it is important to point out their existence prominently, but as pointed out, there are other forms of organisation involved in production and these may also be "capitalist", and so the word should be "commonly" or something along those lines. --Andrew
The following is a nice succinct definition from The Complete A-Z Business Studies Handbook:
--Sam
This, I think, is a better opening. However, it is all one sentence (although it does use semi-colons..). So I think it needs a style edit. Nice work though, thanks to whoever wrote it. Anything else that needs to go in the first paragraph? -- Sam
--Andrew I don't think that it is a better opening. It doesn't point out the key point about capitalism, and that is the trade in ownership of productive organisations - not only trade in capital goods, but trade in ownership of the organisations themselves. All of the economic practices mentioned in the definition immediately above were carried out before capitalism existed. People had been acting as corporations and trading capital goods and other goods and services in free markets for centuries before capitalism. It was only the development of shares (or stocks) that allowed the formation of large companies and easy trade in ownership of companies that capitalism came into being, then the theories and beliefs followed. I'm putting the other start back in.
Many dictionaries and other similar books are very approximate with their definitions of capitalism pointing out many associated practices, phenomena, and theories rather than talking about capitalism itself. And not surprisingly many people use the word refering to the associated things. These common associations should be pointed out in the article, but surely we can start with a succinct and accurate definition the word rather than the associated phenomena and practices. You can see from history that it is the ownership and tradeability of ownership in companies that is the key thing. It was only after this became common practice that the type of economy we tend to refer to as capitalist and the word capitalism itself came into being. --Andrew
--(Andrew speaking here) First off, good work I think - on the whole. The article is getting better.
The vagueness in the start you replaced was intended, and was the result of trying to find what is common between the differing uses of the word. But I take the point that it may be confusing to start with a vague statement. There's not that much common ground between the different uses of the word Capitalism, so a common-ground type of statement doesn't seem to say a lot, especially when you are in an environment where ownership is ubiquitous. The existence of ownership relationships between people and the means of production is important and significant, and is somewhere there in the core of Capitalism, so the old opening did in fact say a lot, it just doesn't say so much to people who are surrounded by ownership, and given that that's going to be most of the readers, perhaps it's not the best way to start.
I don't remember mentioning shares in the first paragraph - but maybe I did in one of my older attempts. I agree "shares" might be seen as specific and perhaps should be in the body, but the type of ownership that they represent is an important distinguishing characteristic of capitalism for many users of the word, and is part of the economic systems most people refer to as capitalist. It was historically co-incident with capitalism when many other features of capitalism were inherited from or in common with previous systems. So I think it should be mentioned somewhere very close to the start.
What I see as wrong with the start you like, is that it mentions a set of characteristics that existed together as a set before capitalism. I agree that all of those features can be seen as part of Capitalism, but they are not a set of distinguishing features. So how can that set of features be listed as a definition of capitalism? I guess that if you count the particular place and time as features, then they might be a distinguishing set, but I don't think that relying on place and time describes what capitalism is very much for a lot of readers.
"sophistication" is a fuzzy sort of word normally anyway - again intentionally vague in trying to find common ground - but I'm sure that if you read it sympathetically you'll realise what it means. It never said that other systems aren't also sophisticated. It only said that capitalism has a degree of sophistication in the way ownership is handled. Any discussion on the history of Capitalism will describe increasingly sophisticated ownership arrangements even if they don't use the word sophisticated. Might you agree that the increase in sophistication with regard to ownership does distinguish capitalism from what it evolved from, and we can still agree that there is sophistication in many aspects of other types of systems? Maybe sophistication isn't the best word - but something along those lines. --Andrew
I think we all agree that any introduction must be somewhat vage, when there is debate over what defines something (like capitalism) and how it developed or why. I think the current definition is accurate, and only as imprecise as it must be to accomodate the range of debate. I think your points should be developed in the body of the article, as appropriate. But I do strongly object to your word "sophistication;" proponents of capitalism may find value in this word and in that context, it is worth discussing. But I do not think it is valid in an objective discussion. Perhaps "complex" or "detailed" would be more appropriate? My advice -- since these are points that are important to you -- is that you rewrite the relevant section and try to find substitutes for "sophisticated." In some cases this may be a less value-laden synonym. But in most cases, I think that instead of any one word you (rather, the article) explain clearly what is or was going on. I am willing to let you work on it a while before I unilaterally delegte these passages -- I do think you have important content to add, so just add it, concretely, and clearly, providing enough context so that a non-historian or economist (or businessperson, or capitalist) could understand it, Slrubenstein
According to Marx, the commoditization of labor led both to commodity fetishism and an expansion of the system of commodities. Marx observed that some people bought commodities in order to use them, while others bought them in order to sell elsewhere at a profit. Much of the history of late capitalism involves what David Harvyue called the "system of flexible accumulation" in which more and more things become commodities the value of which is determined by their exchange rather than use. Thus not only are pins commodities; shares of ownership in a factory that makes pins become commodities; then options on shares become commodities; then portions of interest rates on bonds become commodities, and so on.
There's interesting points in this, but some suggestions: I think that at the first mention of Marx many people turn off, unfairly, but nevertheless his name is associated in many people's mind with "bad evil communism", and people might not trust an article about capitalism that seems to use "communist" terms to describe it. You might move the whole paragraph "as is" into the critisisms section to explain the marxist understanding of capitalism, or maybe better take Marx's name out of it, and perhaps reword it without commoditization, and a couple of other "sophisticated" (no offense intended) phrases, so that my nephew in high school can read it okay. What do you reckon?
He most definitely should be mentioned, because of the important observations that he made, and the unfair associations are a reason to make his name prominant to try to correct those associations, but care is still needed in how it is done.
and then there's another deep association in saying that commoditization of labour caused commodity fetishism,
and also understanding commodity fetishism itself takes a bit of effort if you have not come across the phrase before.
These ideas are important, but when they are initially presented compressed into one sentence it seems a bit much. Maybe some expansion or something might make it an easier read for many without diluting the ideas themselves.
As you say, these are points that need to be explained and expanded upon. The only thing I insist on -- as a writer, not as a partisan in some debate about capitalism -- is that the introduction b short, concise, and precise, and general enough to introduce the whole article. All expansion, elaboration, and explanation should be done in the body of the article, Slrubenstein
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