Nice way to unwhitewash the Stalin article, G-Man ~~ Usually people just hack away without actually adding anything :) 豎眩
So why the separate ship canal article, when canal covers the same subject matter? Why not just add to it? I would never look for an article under "ship canal".
--jaknouse
Because Ship canals are a special category of canal. Any way if someone was trying to look up information specificaly about ship canals, it is better to have a article separately. Although you might have a point about the adding the info to the canal article, I might copy and paste and do that as well. User:G-Man
How do you mean exactly G-Man
Oh thanks, I live and learn G-Man[?]
From your edits to the Black Country article, it looks like you're fairly local, so I thought I'd say hello! --Sam
Now about the other question you raised. Inefficiency, supply shortages, and poor quality are important topics, but these systemic problems are far greater problems once more attention is paid to consumer goods in the post-Stalin years. But the article does tie these problems to the Stalin era. If you read the article beyond Stalin you’d see that the article is stressing that the Stalin years laid the groundwork for systemic problems that would become pronounced well after Stalin’s death and indeed even today.
The article might not be written in the prose of Robert Conquest with which many readers are familiar, but it by no means calling the Stalinist administrative command system a “success”, which you accused it of stating.
Perhaps you’d get a greater sense of the logical flow if of the article if you read on past the Stalin years.
In other words, the Great Purges were well-covered even before I added content to that section. Before you add more on the Great Purges some of the issues that I listed need to be addressed first.
The article already is quite long. Perhaps it would be best to shorten the content on World War II and the Stalin years so that we can add more content pertaining to the Khrushchev, Brezhnev, Andropov, Chernenko, and Gorbachev years. 172
I think that history of the Stalin and WW2 years are too important a part of history to be shortened. The Stalin years are the bit I'm most knowledgable about, although I could try and do some research on other parts of the USSR's history.
Perhaps the article could do with splitting into two parts with a history of the USSR part 1 covering the 1917-1953 period and Part 2 covering the 1953-1991 period, how does that sound.
I like most of what you've written. Have you read Russia, The Tsarist and Soviet legacy by Edward Acton, that is my main history book on the USSR. G-Man 20/4/03
I really like your idea of splitting the article. Until now, I was worried that I was focusing too much on the prewar years. I was ready to delete a good portion of my content to make room for the post-war years. I look forward to working on that project with you.
I'm familiar with that text by Acton incidentally. I have to admit that I'm biased toward some aspects of Acton's approach, such as viewing the rise of the Soviet Union in its late imperial Czarist context while assessing Russia's international setting (its geography, that old problem of the lack of access to the sea, and dependency prior to the Revolution). He does a great job of illuminating why the Communist revolution occurred in Russia, and not in a more developed industrial power with a larger working class. And his linkage of Yeltsin's super-presidentialism to Russia's longstanding political culture is persuasive, although I'd be a bit more inclined to argue that the nature of the "shock therapy" reforms contributed to this new authoritarianism just like other misguided economic policies in the past, like collectivization and the general abandonment of the NEP.
Let's expound on the post-Stalin years and then split the article into two sections, one on 1917-1953 and the other on 1953-1991.
Hi, there is an edit-war on Communist state. Unfortunately your NPOVing occured after a large block of POV material that already exists in another article was pasted in again by the person who has doing this consistently. In reverting his stuff, your NPOVing was lost. When I get a chance, I will go through your changes and see which bits apply to the surviving text and make corrections. Apologies in any case. As you can see, there is an 'agenda'-based war going on there and all efforts to produce an NPOV are constantly being frustrated by the pasted in POV stuff of a small minority. Trying to make this article NPOV is proving a nightmare because of the actions of one person. ÉÍREman 23:42 May 10, 2003 (UTC)
Note that almost everything you can do can be undone, so don't be too worried about making mistakes. You will find more information at Wikipedia:Administrators, please take a look before experimenting with your new powers. Drop me a message if there are any questions or if you want to stop being a sysop (could it be?). Have fun! --Eloquence 19:17 21 Jun 2003 (UTC)
Thankyou I'll be careful not to let my new found power go to my head G-Man 13:26 22 Jun 2003 (UTC)
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